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Completely

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Completely

I feel you with me
through the long hours
of my day

I feel you around me
as I go through
my daily chores

I feel you near me
no matter where
I may go

I feel you completely
always I feel you
completely

my love
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Picassos-Bathroom's avatar

Lovely. First off, I love the title, it's such a potent word isn't it? And, "my love" is so much sweeter than "I love you sometimes" and much less likely to be a lie.  The sense of yearning and being permeated by another is very much felt in this work. It is true that when in love, it never leaves you.